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    May 05, 2010

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dat ribcage

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She looks so realistic
6 år sedan
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litle Pamela A.)))))
8 år sedan
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C221najimi13C221I need this. ;_; Where did you order her?
I got her from amiami... I think she'll be in stock for a while. Doesn't seem like a lot of people can appreciate her beautiful body. :<

People can't seem to appreciate Oyari Ashito's art in general, it seems...


Such a good artist
8 år sedan
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najimi13C221I need this. ;_; Where did you order her?
I got her from amiami... I think she'll be in stock for a while. Doesn't seem like a lot of people can appreciate her beautiful body. :<

People can't seem to appreciate Oyari Ashito's art in general, it seems...
8 år sedan
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Thanks for the comments and compliments, everyone.

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-focus: more dof. Harsher transition in focus from her face to her hair and right arm in the shadows than what I'd prefer. This is one of those matter of taste type of deals, I prefer a little more of the subject in focus at this distance (hips to head). Tighter in I might go for the shallower dof.

-lighting: light kind of dies off more than I'd like as you get lower down her body, I'd prefer if her left arm and hips were lit up a bit more. Not a lot, just enough to balance a bit with the hot spot on her hair, bring out her belly and make her left hand look less like it's in a soft shadow. Maybe move the light source back and down a bit and adjust exposure or use a dull reflector.


Yeah, pretty much the two things I didn't like the most out of this one. I didn't realize how bad the blacks were on the left until I was editing it in post. Got to get that second flash :<. And as much as I wanted to stop down more, it made the background more obviously look like tin foil. Probably would've helped if I had more space to work with. lol


I think your CC is helpful. You mostly say for others what I'd input, so I don't want to be repetitive and just not post. lol
8 år sedan
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Hmm...CC...

Maybe I'll try like, a list format or something for this one ^^;;

Stuff I think is good:
-colors: rich, warm and inviting. Lovely atmosphere.

-angle: kind of candid, little mysterious and alluring. Works well in this shot.

-lighting: nice contrast, gives her a nice sense of depth and accents the good job they did on sculpting her body :3 See below for additional comment.

-framing: well composed, well done.


Stuff I might change:
-focus: more dof. Harsher transition in focus from her face to her hair and right arm in the shadows than what I'd prefer. This is one of those matter of taste type of deals, I prefer a little more of the subject in focus at this distance (hips to head). Tighter in I might go for the shallower dof.

-lighting: light kind of dies off more than I'd like as you get lower down her body, I'd prefer if her left arm and hips were lit up a bit more. Not a lot, just enough to balance a bit with the hot spot on her hair, bring out her belly and make her left hand look less like it's in a soft shadow. Maybe move the light source back and down a bit and adjust exposure or use a dull reflector.


Summary:
Good shot. Love the feel of it. Like Ash's and Yama's shots, gotta nitpick it and most of the critique is really just small things I would change that I personally feel would make it even better. Why do I always feel like an ass when I write these... Would love to hear your opinion on my CC. CC really works both ways and honestly with me doing most of the heavy critique sometimes I feel like you guys think I'm just blowing smoke out of my ass when I write these lol.
8 år sedan
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Ashlotte Full-time Reviewer
Beautiful colors in this especially the skin tones and eyes!

*edit*

Oh fudge now I see you linked this in the CC thread...

But I can't think of anything but praise haha. Ah yea great angle...Love the color of the BG and the overall fuzzy feel of it...Sorry for being useless I have no complaints. T_T
8 år sedan
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najimi13C221I need this. ;_; Where did you order her?
I got her from amiami... I think she'll be in stock for a while. Doesn't seem like a lot of people can appreciate her beautiful body. :<


I agree. I bought this for my boyfriend as a gift, and he loves it!
8 år sedan
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Nice!
8 år sedan
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C221I need this. ;_; Where did you order her?
I got her from amiami... I think she'll be in stock for a while. Doesn't seem like a lot of people can appreciate her beautiful body. :<
8 år sedan
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